A poor torn heart, a tattered heart
Tattered heart
Not broken—*tattered*. The heart is worn out from use, like fabric that's been through too much, not shattered in one dramatic moment.
Ebbing day / silver
Tide language for sunset. The day flows out like water, but the heart doesn't notice—too focused inward to see beauty.
Latitudes unknown
Navigation term. The heart is lost, trying to find its position, staring at an internal map that makes no sense.
Blue havens
Heaven/haven pun. The safe harbor is literally heaven—where lost sailors (souls) finally get guided home.