At Home
Blew out itself
The star extinguishes like a candle in wind—Dickinson makes celestial objects as fragile as household flames. This domestic scale is her signature move.
Intermittent plush
Dog paws on frozen ground sound soft-hard-soft. 'Plush' is fabric language for animal sound—she's mixing textures with acoustics.
To feel if blinds
Subject shift—no warning. We jump from outdoor scene to the housewife's ritual. Dickinson drops 'she' and makes us supply it.
Shiver for the poor
She shivers *for* them, not *with* them. Sympathy from safety—the fire is right there. Dickinson is poking at comfortable pity.
The sleet than May
She prefers winter isolation to May's sociability ('thee'). The housewife chooses weather that keeps people away—this is Dickinson's autobiography.