Trees
Personification strategy
The tree is given human anatomy—mouth, breast, arms, hair, bosom. This isn't decoration; it's the poem's entire argument. By making the tree human, Kilmer can claim it does what humans do (pray, nurture), but better.
Religious observation
The tree 'looks at God all day'—a constant attention humans can't sustain. Combined with 'leafy arms to pray,' this positions trees as naturally spiritual beings, not metaphorically but functionally.
Passive endurance
Snow 'has lain' on the tree; rain 'intimately' touches it. The tree doesn't resist or change these things—it simply receives them. This acceptance is part of what makes it superior to human-made poems.
The closing reversal
'Fools like me' isn't false modesty—it's the logical conclusion of the argument. If only God makes trees, and trees are superior to poems, then the poet who makes poems is by definition inferior to God's creation.